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Post by hermit07 on Aug 2, 2006 13:02:32 GMT -5
The title of my Fan Fic will either be Gene Nation, or Muties, and it will include a list of Morlocks, who after their time in solitude arrive at a cross roads where they can't decide whether they shjould live in the sewers, or whether they should come out of hiding. The group that does leaves, and arrives at Xaviers where they decide that they are going to start a team, which is underground and based in California. Later on it will include Maggot, Gambit, and Marrow, who are sent with the team so that they can get put on the proper path.
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Post by Marshal Hartman on Aug 2, 2006 15:07:42 GMT -5
marrow is on astonishing, n ull have to bring maggott back, which i have a clever plan for if u want, but other than that looks good. i like muties as a title, but i came up with it so lol
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Post by tj on Sept 2, 2006 14:40:31 GMT -5
My World (working title)
Imagine you're one of the biggest freaks in your school. Okay, now you've done that, imagine you're one of the most hated and feared minorities in the world (and no, I'm not Canadian =D). Yes, that's right ladies and gentlemen. I'm a sodding mutant.
Now it's all well and good if you live in America and are part of the Avengers, lucky bastards have it made don't they. America land of the free, home to the super heroes. Well i got news for you buddy, we aint in Kansas, or New York or any of those other super hero hangouts. We're in Brighton (possibly, I may change location) quite possibly the most boring place in Britain and that, in my sodding opinion, is saying something.
Now you may think, 'well, the kids a mutant, should make things fun, right?' WRONG! Heh, it's like all those X-Men spin off people never even WENT to school it's full of sluts, whores bitches and my ever favourite unfriendly popular hotties. All of these people hate eachother's guts yet they all seem to unite against the common enemy. Me. Or, to be precise mutants in general. Not to mention the odd wiccan wannabe. At least we don't have illegal genetic experiments in this school yet, that would just mess things up beyond belief.
Well, I can tell you one thing, I'm DEFINATELY not gonna tell people what i am, let them figure it out for themselves. Of course, i'm probably tempting fate by saying that. Most of my friends are annoyingly perceptive in things like this. Just my luck.
Next subject: My parents. Every kid my age hates their parents. They're embarressing, mortifying and every other related emotion under the sun and mine are no different. My dad's a little bit nuts. He's one of those geeks that idolises super heroes. His latest obsession? The Avenger with the nice ass known as Spiderwoman, he's into all those chatrooms discussing her and stuff. LAME ALERT. My mum's slightly more normal but just as bad. How would you like to come home one day to find your mother having an affair with the milkman who's actually the nicest guy you've ever met? Heh, yeah, speechless right? Yeah, I thought so...
As if that wasn't enough to deal with, let's take a little look at the drawing board shall we? My best friend thinks she's a proper dedicated wiccan. She's like a total Scarlet witch wannabe. My other friends are just as exasperating but let's leave that for later.
Believe it or not, the worst is yet to come. Have you ever felt that the people aorund you are evil? Felt that they're just waiting for the perfect moment to pounce on you, ready for the kill? Heh, try living around here. Even if we completely disregard the most evil school on Earth we still have certain homocidal creatures about. Creatures that like to leave tags of what they are. Little signs on the walls, signs in the floor, lines in the sand. Warpies, whatever the hell they are...
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Post by Marshal Hartman on Sept 2, 2006 14:52:53 GMT -5
i absolutley love this pitch. is it going to be written like this? i love that part the most! have you seen read it and weep(yes the DCOM, yes im 16, but i have younger siblings) it reminds me of that
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Post by David McNamara on Sept 8, 2006 9:37:06 GMT -5
X West (Id like to change the title to that, if it's ok) Characters: Callisto (leader), Ever, Sabre, Thunderbird, Electric Eve, Aurora and Abyss.
First arc: Finding Your Roots
Starting with an introduction to the team this arc will take place after the West Coast X-Men are introduced in Uncanny. I plan to take a look into Electric Eve's past. What exactly happened to the rest of the Morlocks that escaped Chicago with her. When one of them shows up on the doorstep of X West's headquarters the consequences for her will be shocking. And can Callisto do anything but offer help to the plight of a people who's history reflects that of her own. What has Ever got locked in his lab? How did Aurora leave Weapon X? Why is Thunderbird hanging with the black sheep of the X-Men? All will be answered in X West!
I have more plot ideas but I don't want to post them here as it might spoil things.
I want this title to be a bit more darker than most X-titles. It will be a bit more gritty with a Weapon X/ early Wolverine feel to it.
Marshall I'll try and add you to my messenger and I have either e-mailed you or PM'd you (too many ways of contact, my blonde head is confused!) about the e-mail you sent me and had Hunter tell me about (now my blonde head hurts)Lol! Anyway what do you think?
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Post by Marshal Hartman on Sept 8, 2006 9:58:30 GMT -5
sounds cool, i like it. gotta wait to c how dan and scott, the vice universe heads, think
just checked my email. im not sure about when you can start writing, ull have to talkt to dan aka martvell about that, as he writes uncanny. as for karima, she is still in genosha, with the x-men who work with magneto and the professor to fufill xavier's dream, but do it in any way possible. as for a name change, what were y0ou thinking?
oh n why didnt sign in when u posted?
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Dave Mc
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X West;Gene Nation
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Post by Dave Mc on Sept 8, 2006 15:11:40 GMT -5
No idea why I wasnt signed in when I posted. It confused me a bit, I hit submit and then it said I had to do something else! Confusion ensued! Lol
As for the name change I just wanted it to be X West rather than West Coast X-Men, just sounded a bit better to me!
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Post by Dan Ballard on Sept 8, 2006 15:45:37 GMT -5
I liked the pitch and hav no problem with you writing it. Aurora is gonna have had some changes with her craziness that I'll pm you.
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Dave Mc
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X West;Gene Nation
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Post by Dave Mc on Sept 8, 2006 16:11:46 GMT -5
Cheers Martvell, I know you have read my stuff on UXN (thanks for the feed back on that by the way) so you have a rough idea of my writing. Liked the Aurora plans and it actually adds to a stroyline I had in mind! So Marshall seems fine for me to write it as well, so just need one more ok! :)lol
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Post by Marshal Hartman on Sept 8, 2006 17:15:35 GMT -5
you should hear from scott soon. i like it alot, and as long as dan aproved, im cool with it. i like the name change too. i sent u the p word.
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Post by maddrox2558 on Sept 8, 2006 20:27:40 GMT -5
Sounds great to me as well. I'm a big fan of the different type of X-Men team with more obscure or lesser known mutants and the A listers not around really. Glad to have you aborad
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Dave Mc
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Post by Dave Mc on Sept 8, 2006 20:49:41 GMT -5
Thanks guys for having me. Looking forward to this whole thing!
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Post by Dan Ballard on Sept 10, 2006 12:24:33 GMT -5
Wolverine
Cast: Wolverine (mystery character-don't want the general public seeing it)
I'm gona start the series right after "Enemy of the State" where he will have gone into hiding from the world, alienating himself from the X-Men, Avengers, and just about every government official he knows. At the start of the series, he still is fighting for control against HYDRAand has become a mercenary because of it.
Arc 1- "The Return of -insert mystery name-" When Wolverine is hired by a mysterious benefactor to take out a threat to them, how will Wolverine react when he sees that the bounty is on, not only a friend, but an ex-lover of his?!
I really don't want to give much away here, Marshal and Scott. I'll pm you the name of who it is.
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Post by Marshal Hartman on Sept 10, 2006 13:27:00 GMT -5
Wolverine is actually dibbed by scott, i just havent had a chance to update the list. durring the gap he'll have quit astonishing, and joined new avengers, then scott will take him for something else that i wont say here cause it will ruin it.
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Post by Dan Ballard on Sept 10, 2006 13:39:51 GMT -5
I knew it was weird that no one dibbed Wolvey. ok.
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